Dummies for Smarties
by Sarah S Brannen
Every book for aspiring children's writers seems to include the line "don't illustrate your book unless you're a
professional artist." But what if you are an experienced, talented artist as well as an aspiring children's
There isn't much help on the bookshelves. Some books mention that after you've written your picture book
manuscript, you should make a dummy book to submit to publishers; they rarely give tips on how to make a
professional-looking dummy, though, and it's hard to find advice about what to avoid or what to be sure to do.
I tormented the teacher of the first children's illustration class I took, asking questions she couldn't always
answer! This article is an attempt to fill in the gaps. There are almost as many ways to make dummies as there are
people who make them, but I have asked a number of children's author/artists, editors and agents what they prefer
Most of the advice in this article is meant for unpublished writer/illustrators. The books are right about one
thing. It's best not to write and illustrate your own book unless you are both an experienced artist and a
competent writer. If you feel confident about both parts of the process, read on!
A dummy is a rough mock-up of your book, meant to show an editor the pace of your story, what images you plan to
illustrate and your ideas for the design of the book.
- Will you have text on the left-hand page and illustrations on the right?
- Are you planning double spreads (illustrations which utilize both the left and right-hand pages) or spot
illustrations on every page?
- Will the text be in boxes or will it float on the image? Will the artwork have borders or be full-bleed,
going all the way to the edge of the page?
As both the writer and the illustrator, you will need to write, revise and polish your story, decide on page
breaks and text placement, plan and sketch the illustrations and even decide where the dedication will go and
whether you'll have a title and half-title page.
Often, you will not choose the font of the text or design the cover and title page; the art director may design
those, working with you and the editor. The editor and art director will both work with you on the
Many illustrators start with storyboards and move on to small thumbnail dummies. No one but you will ever see
them so you can do what works best for you. The basic structure of a 32-page picture book is as follows. The cover
and endpapers are usually not included in the page count.
- Page 1 is (usually) the title page; occasionally page 1 is a half-title page.
- Page 2 usually lists the copyright information.
- Page 3 is sometimes a half-title page, and sometimes a dedication, occasionally it's the title page.
- Sometimes the story starts on page 3, but in the majority of cases the story starts on page 4 or 5 and ends
on page 31 or 32.
- Although picture books can also be 24, 40 or 48 pages, it's probably best for the beginner to stick with 32
pages, the length of the vast majority of picture books on the shelves. It gives the publisher one less thing
to worry about, like marketing an unusual-length book.
Making the dummy
After you have done storyboards and tiny thumbnail dummies, make at least one rough dummy to work out the
structure of your book.
Author/artist Katie Davis (Who Hops?) often makes a dozen or more rough dummies, although this is an
unusually high number. Experiment with different text placements and do a lot of rough pencil sketches of the
At this phase of the project you'll probably be working on the story and pictures simultaneously. When you're
ready to do the final dummy pages, make sure that the sketches show all the important aspects of the illustrations.
ulie Strauss-Gabel, an editor at Dutton Books for Young Readers, says that she wants to see fully-considered
scenes that show your skill as an artist, writer and visual storyteller. She looks for finesse in visual
storytelling as well as in word choice.
Agent Steven Malk says it's helpful if the sketches for the dummy are complete. You don't need to show every
last freckle and eyelash though; don't worry about details for the dummy.
It's best to work in black and white, whatever your preferred drawing medium. Color sketches may imply that you
have developed your illustrations to the point that you won't want to make changes; remember that if you get a
contract you may need to change every single illustration as well as revise the text.
Make your dummy the same size and shape as you hope the finished book will be. The editor and art director will
have input into the final size, in part because of cost considerations, but the size and shape are part of your
vision. If you imagine that the page size will be close to 8 1/2" by 11" it can be convenient to work at that
Katie Davis says that the dummy should look and feel as close to a real book as possible without it being too
finished. I realize this sounds impossible, but when the editor is reading the dummy you want her to be able to
imagine the finished book that you have in your head. Although you can glue the text onto copies of your sketches,
I think it's best to make or print copies of each page so nothing can fall off.
If you're comfortable using Quark or other design programs, you can design the whole book on the computer. I get
two-sided copies of my final dummy pages done at a copy shop, on 70 or 80 lb. paper, which is heavy enough that the
printing doesn't show through. It's fine to glue or tape one-sided copies together for each page, if you wish.
You have a lot of leeway in making the cover of your dummy. You can do a careful mock-up of a possible cover,
keeping in mind that the publisher will almost certainly change it, or you can do a plain cover with the name of
the book and your contact information. Some people make very elaborate covers and sew their dummies together but I
don't think it's really necessary.
There are many different ways to put the dummy together. Any stationery or art supply store sells portfolios or
notebooks with clear plastic pages. Some people slip each dummy page into one of these, and cut out the extra pages
with a mat knife. The advantage of this kind of book is that it's easy to make changes, although you are limited to
an 8 1/2" by 11" vertical format. The binders can sometimes look a bit cheap, and the whole book doesn't look very
distinctive; they usually have black plastic covers, and beware, because these can get too warm in a car and warp
in a most unattractive way.
You can simply trim your pages to the desired size and glue or double-stick tape them together if you haven't
gotten two-sided copies. Then staple the pages together. This is fast and cheap way to make a dummy but leaves
little sticky-out staple parts ready to scratch editors and their desks. Be sure to cover the staples with tape to
avoid this! Also remember to leave a quarter-inch to half-inch "selvage" on the correct side of each illustration,
so that you don't lose any of your picture when you staple or bind the dummy.
If you're handy with a needle and thread, you can make the dummy from larger sheets of paper folded in the
middle and sewn down the spine. In order to have all the pages end up in the right order, you'll probably have to
make a little dummy of your dummy and take it apart. The outer sheet of paper will include pages 1, 2, 31 and 32
for example. Personally, I get a bit confused putting this kind of dummy together, and I worry about the thread
I make some sort of cover design out of a finished illustration and print it onto card stock on my home printer.
I use a blank piece of card for a back cover, trim two-sided copies of the pages to the correct size and shape, and
have a copy shop bind the dummy together with Velobind (a thin black plastic strip that runs along the spine). It
looks neat and professional and it's quite durable.
You should make several copies of your dummy, so you can submit it to different places, and in case of damage. I
recommend making from five to ten copies at a time; I made only three copies of my first dummy and came to regret
it when two of them were permanently lost by editors!
Remember that your dummy may be read by a first and second reader, go to a committee or even two committees and
be passed all around the offices of a publishing house. It's important that it be sturdy enough not to fall apart,
and it's also nice if it's tough enough that you can use it for subsequent submissions should it be rejected the
Author/artist Lisa Kopelke (Excuse me!) says, "The one big thing to remember is to find that fine line
between being professional, and not going overboard. If you go too far editors may get the impression that you are
not flexible. Professional means to keep your presentation simple, classy and easy to handle (like no coffee
stains, no money tucked in the folds, and no fur wrapped covers, unless it's a bunny book!). They like all levels
of art, all different kinds of art, you just have to find that special match."
Look at a lot of high-quality picture books, and you will see that the illustrations have a number of things in
common. The illustrations usually include close-ups, middle-distance and distant views, and show a variety of
scenes. They may use unusual viewpoints, like birds-eye or "worms-eye" views. The variety of the pictures helps
keep the book interesting; a story set in a single room might seem wonderful in a running manuscript, but the
illustrations could be monotonous!
As you're working on the sketches for the dummy, be sure to leave room for your text. Cut the text up and tack
it on to each page of the rough dummy with repositionable tape or adhesive. Then, as you work on the sketches, you
can move the text around until you find the best place for it against the illustrations.
If you have a very busy full-page illustration, the text may be illegible against the background. You can either
have no text on that page, or find a way to include an area of solid color or white, against which the text will
stand out. The movement in the illustrations goes to the right, pulling the reader toward the page turn.
As Katie Davis says, the drama of the story is in the page turns. A page turn can be the punch-line of a joke,
or a big surprise. Important parts of the illustration should not be drawn too close to the gutter, the valley
between facing pages. Double-spread illustrations that need to line up from one page to the other might not align
perfectly in the middle, so bear that in mind when you think about the connection between left-hand and right-hand
pages. In a 32-page picture book, pages 16 and 17 are a single sheet of paper with stitching down the middle, right
in the center of the book. This is a great place for a double spread; it's the only place where nothing will get
lost in the gutter.
The rhythm of the story needs to be spaced out over the whole book; make sure that you don't have some pages
with a lot of text and some with very little unless this is deliberately part of the plan of your book. (For
instance, Maurice Sendak's classic Where the Wild Things Are has no text in the central Wild Rumpus
scene). The editor will work with you on determining page breaks in the final book, but give this a lot of thought
as you plan your dummy.
Along with the dummy, submit a running manuscript in standard format, and between one and three highest-quality
samples of the finished artwork. Some houses request only one sample, but most of the editors and agents I talked
to said they'd like to see two or three. Never submit any original art.
Steven Malk points out that even with all this material, a good cover letter is still essential. He says that
you should be able to describe your project in a concise, interesting manner and also give the agent/publisher the
impression that you're familiar with the market and that you know where your book fits in. If you're submitting to
an agent, include a brief biography.
It should be evident that a lot of time and thought went into your submission; make your presentation as
impressive as possible to communicate the fact that you're reliable and professional. Sometimes people bind the
finished art into their dummies but it's better to submit the art samples separately so that the editor can keep
them on file if she likes them.
Be sure to put complete contact information on each art sample as well as on the dummy. Things can get lost or
I have heard a lot of discussions among writer/illustrators about whether to submit a dummy/ms/sample package to
an editor or to an art director. The consensus is that it's best to submit to editors, since they have the power to
acquire books. Submitting a dummy to an art director will show her that you know how to put a story together and it
may help you get work illustrating someone else's story, but your book may not get passed on to the editorial
An editor may want to keep your art samples on file if she likes them; mention in your cover letter whether
you're willing to have the art and manuscript considered separately. Different editors have different opinions
about receiving dummy packages from writer/illustrators.
John Rudolph, editor at G. P. Putnam's Sons, prefers to make his decisions based solely on the story. He doesn't
want to see a dummy or any art at all until he has accepted a manuscript. On the other hand, Dianne Hess, executive
editor of Scholastic Press, loves to get dummies even when the author is not a trained artist. She likes to see how
the story will flow in the 32-page format.
Not all children's book agents represent picture books, but most make an exception for writer/illustrators. Many
editors, too, are on the lookout for talented writer/illustrators. Editor Julie Strauss-Gabel says, "I receive
very few dummy/ms/illustration packages. At the most, I get about one a month, but usually just one every other
month. Unfortunately, one component - art or text - is often not up to the level of the other. I need to see that
the project succeeds on all levels. Is the art of high quality, well executed, vivid, accomplished? Is the story
solid and original? Are the characters compelling? Is there a particular finesse in the visual storytelling as well
as in the word choice? I'd love to see more work from author/illustrators. We're always looking for new
author/illustrator talent. Even if you're still getting your footing as a writer, I'd love to see innovative,
visually-driven projects from highly-skilled illustrators."
In the case of houses like Dutton that are open only to queries, get their guidelines. If they don't mention
picture books written and illustrated by the same person, submit a standard picture book query letter with one
high-quality illustration sample. The submission requirements vary from house to house, so find out as much as you
can prior to submission.
Eileen Christelow, What Do Illustrators Do? (Houghton Mifflin Co., 1999) - although this is actually a
children's picture book, it is one of the most useful sources available for a beginning picture book illustrator.
Also see her book What Do Writers Do?
Uri Shulevitz, Writing With Pictures: how to write and illustrate children's books (Watson-Guptill
Publications, 1985) - this book is full of excellent advice on visual layouts. It is somewhat dated; it includes a
long chapter on color separations, for instance, which are no longer necessary.
(c) Sarah S. Brannen.
This article first appeared on Yellapalooza.com http://yellapalooza.com/ a web site for children's writer/illustrators. Sarah
S. Brannen is a founding member of Yellapalooza; to see examples of her artwork, please visit her web site,